making criminals like Joseph Kony famous.My opinion is that we should make them famous.Before I explain my reasons for my opinion,I'll
tell you about Joseph Kony and about Kony
2012. Joseph Kony is the NO.1 wanted criminal,and he lived in Uganda.he kidnapped kids and made an army with them.He used boys as soilders and forced them to kill their parents and people.When they tried to escape,they were killed.When 3 America students heard this,they started makeing a short movie about kony's horrible crimes.The movie's title is Kony 2012.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y4MnpzG5Sqc
This movie made Kony very famous,and the movie makers belived making makeing Kony famous could
stop him from kidnapping kids.My oppinion is the same with the movie maker's,because kony is not in
Uganda now.Because kony left Uganda,lots of people around the world should know who he is.Then, catching him wold be a lot more easier than a world not knowing him.n conclsion, I want to say that Joseph Kony should be famous because it could stop him kidnapping.
THANK YOU!!!
Hi Steven,
ReplyDeleteThe introduction is very good. The pictures and video link add to your writing and support your opinion. However, the body of the essay and conclusion is too short. try to explain your reasons in detail and also give the oppositions' opinion and rebute it.
Good luck!